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 Oi, over here! (Manchester App.)

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Martin Kirkland


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Join date : 2016-12-20
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PostSubject: Oi, over here! (Manchester App.)   Tue Dec 20, 2016 8:29 pm

Name: Martin Kirkland

Representative of: Manchester, England

Gender: Male

Age: Looks around 21 but is around 715

Brief personality: First thing you need to know about Martin is that he doesn't fuck around. He isn't afraid to speak his mind and loves to get wasted. He is dedicated and loyal to his "lads" and is always down for a good time. He has tried to stop smoking but still does when he's stressed. He is very smart but will only show that side of him if he trusts you or he's drunk.

Brief physical description: Martin is a 6'0 ft pale young man. He has short dirty blonde hair that borders along the line of being brown. His eyes are a bluish green and his face is dotted with freckles. He has long, lean legs and a built torso. He usually opts to wearing jeans and a fitted shirt. However in the occasion in that he is wooing someone, he'll dress like a young Oxford professor.

Brief history:
Spoiler:
 

Religious affiliation: Anglican

Any special powers or abilities: Has very few magic abilities but is an amazing footballer


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Fernando {2p! M! Granada}


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Location : Granada, Spain.

PostSubject: Re: Oi, over here! (Manchester App.)   Fri Feb 10, 2017 12:23 am

Hello there, and good evening! As a resident of the U.K myself, and having gone to Manchester before, you have a very nice application, and I admire the work you've put into it. I'm not too sure if you're active right now, but if you want this to come through, then the physical and psychological description need (at the very least) two more sentences (as the minimum amount of sentences would be 5).

Another recommendation I give to polish your application better and for it to be easier to navigate through the app would be to put your story in-between spoilers. The way to format it is:

[spoiler.]I love me some bacon.[/spoiler]

It's just a matter to get rid of the dot from above and you'll be able to paste everything inside right away without making all of it look cramped. e.g I'll type below random letters to see how actually neat and efficient it is for big texts:

Spoiler:
 


I will give you 1 week from today to modify your application, if you need help don't hesitate to P.M me!
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